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Experiment #9

Max the mouse said "Come on Randy before the cat comes" when searching for some food from the fridge. A rat then appeared dressed in rags ran towards the mouse and shouted "I'm Coming!" The cat then noticed the rat going to the fridge, ran towards the rat and picked up Randy. Max then picked up a needle by the kitchen counter and threw it at the cat's eye. "Go to hell you murderous fiend" Max said as the cat wallowed in pain. After the cat ran away, the mice and rat gathered whatever food they can. Randy then thanked Max for saving him as they dined on cheese, wine and grapes. "What do you plan to do if the cat comes back?" asks Randy after taking a bite from the cheddar cheese. "Maybe kill him" says Max while drunk from wine. "But why?" responded Randy. "Because he will kill us and our relatives just for taking care of ourselves." Max answered firmly. "Can we convince him to go away?" asked Randy …

Experiment #8

Medieval Time Travel 1400's: A Life's Journey

This video game would take you back in time to the medieval period of the 1400's where you can change the future after the game ends as an open world medieval time travel game. You can explore this medieval period, share your perspectives to the locals, learn the language, study the culture, learn how to function in society and you can gain influence through either your loyalty to the society or a revolutionary who can challenge the status quo. The trope that reflects that happening is the Stable Time Loop trope. Also that character cannot return which is the Trapped in the Past trope. If you make bad decisions in the game that affect the history it can create a Karmic Twist Ending where the ending turns out bad. Another result that happens when playing is creating Alternate Timeline trope which can help change history for better or for the worse. When in the medieval period expect the Christianity is Catholic trope where most …

Critique #1

Nicholas Mocalis Professor Bradford 2-22-18 ENGL M10A                                                                      Critique #1 1.Michaela, Write to Me Essay: The first critique I found with your essay is that the beginning paragraph does not really establish the central theme of the story which is the war Damien has faced and Samantha reading a journal that wrote to him from a year ago. Instead it just explains more about where the journal is. It probably would be better to establish and describe some context to the story so the audience would understand what Samantha experienced first and then establish where the journal is. In between each letter you write to Damien try to have a paragraph describing what Samantha is doing or feeling when experiencing these events when she writes to Damien. The story themes are based on war movies where the love interest writes letters to someone who is off at war like Cold Mountain but the key differences are that she is reading her journa…

Experiment #8

Medieval Time Travel 1400's: A Life's Journey

This video game would take you back in time to the medieval period of the 1400's where you can change the future after the game ends as an open world medieval time travel game. You can explore this medieval period, share your perspectives to the locals, learn the language, study the culture, learn how to function in society and you can gain influence through either your loyalty to the society or a revolutionary who can challenge the status quo. The trope that reflects that happening is the Stable Time Loop trope. Also that character cannot return which is the Trapped in the Past trope. If you make bad decisions in the game that affect the history it can create a Karmic Twist Ending where the ending turns out bad. Another result that happens when playing is creating Alternate Timeline trope which can help change history for better or for the worse. When in the medieval period expect the Christianity is Catholic trope where most …

Tombstone Epitaph

I always remember what logic and love means to the world and to others. I understood this by understanding people the question is can you?

Experiment #7 Romance or not Space Edition

Nicholas Mocalis
2-14-18
ENGL M10A
Professor Bradford

                                                                    Experiment #7
(Jenny Prime, a female astronaut enters the center of the spaceship)

Jenny: Oh!

(She spots a male stowaway with black hair and a modest body build)

Jenny: (V.O) He seems attractive but I do no know who he is and why he is on the spaceship?

(The stranger then notices Jenny and starts to walk up to her)

Jenny: (V.O) I do not know who he is and he is coming up close to me. Should I say hello? Should I say I love him? I do not know?

The Stranger: Can you help me find a bathroom because I need a shower.

(Assuming that the stranger needs help Jenny shudders nervously)

Jenny: Do you need help in there? I also want to know your name.

The Stranger: Not until I am done showering and I do not need help really.

(Jenny steps back and waits nervously for him to get out of the shower. Once he step out he was fully clothed in a space suit)

The Stranger: By the way th…

Narrative #1

Nicholas Mocalis ENGL M10A 1-20-18 Professor Bradford                                                                   Narrative #1                 When I went to College I saw the political debate club where there were multiple different candidates debating on different ideas and topics that included discussions about life experiences and political opinions. The debate rules will be that members would have an opening statement, responses, and a closing statement. After the person speaks then the audience can respond to be respectful. I decided to join seeing that I had a grasp on certain political topics and I have always wanted to discuss the issues that affect everybody’s lives. As the topic was put on the front of the college school board I was immediately conflicted about it. The reason why was because the person I was debating was a Trump supporter named Frank Jones who is a white 20 year old man who wears farming overalls, a white shirt, jeans and a make America great again h…

Love Poetry

Love is is taking on someone on a flight
which is both by day and through the night
Being with another person through history
determining whether or not these feelings are a mystery
Developing something that is made through to understand
what both people are thinking and feeling across this land
A chance for marriage and happiness to spark
which can cause both people's minds to go to work
Producing a love which can surpass anger and fear
towards something that is rewarding and dear
Something that is meaningful to what it means
to be lost in each others dreams
If love succeeds it lifts your heart
but if it fails it can tear both apart
Oh how love on what both people can mend
where both can succeed or fail which is rise and descend